Microcosm - 2nd Seedrs crowd-funding round

"Community forums, done better."

That was me trying to strike that Apple moment of tada!

Perhaps ditch the word 'forums" completely since forums are so last night. Heard the best new places on the web and off are called microcosms

Community communities, communing communally.

Community impunity immunity.

Perhaps ditch the word 'forums" completely since forums are so last night. Heard the best new places on the web and off are called microcosms

Yeah, but everyone knows forums are shit, doing them better is obviously going to win.

Many people don't know forums are shit because they don't use such geek bits of the web. They may engage with a microcosm if they can enjoy their interest and doing so will be completely intuitive , easy

So avoid the word forums
(and as any one in my line of work will know you cant sell cycle training by calling it cycle training). Have you considered that?

Microcosm lets you
talk about your interest
in a community dedicated to your interest
and we take care of the rest

Microcosm - create the online community for your interest

you cant sell cycle training by calling it cycle training). Have you considered that?
How would cycle training help with microcosm.app?

Like that^^

Microcosm is helping cycle training already

Vaginas, but with onions...

Microcosm lets you
talk about your interest
in a community dedicated to your interest
whilst we take care of the rest

Microcosm - create the online community for your interest

Tweaked.

Although it has something of the quality of an 80's advert voiceover to it...

Microcosm:
lets you talk about your interest
in a community dedicated to your interest
whilst we take care of the rest

Microcosm - create the online community for your interest

Vaginas, but with onions...

Cocks, but with puke.

'Talk about your interests' doesn't the community do more than talk? Here we talk and ride and drink and eat pizza and raise charity money and by and sell and...I could go on , which us why 'lets you enjoy...' encompases more. Makes microcosm more visionary

OK, lets play more:

*Microcosm lets you
enjoy your interest
in a community dedicated to your interest
whilst we take care of the rest

Microcosm - create the online community for your interest*

enjoy I don't feel quite sounds right somehow, enjoying your interest is what you do now isn't it? That's why you're interested in it?

What about explore?

*Microcosm lets you
explore your interest
in a community dedicated to your interest
whilst we take care of the rest

Microcosm - create the online community for your interest*

better?

Live your interests,
In your own online home,
That we take care of for you.

MrDrem good word 'explore'

"We help you
engage with communities
that love your interests."

We think is nearly final for the infographic thing.

Writing copy is dull.

Oh, and: "Communities, reimagined".

Is that magical enough?

Coding is dull
Different strokes....

"We help you
engage with communities
that love your interests."

We think is nearly final for the infographic thing.

Writing copy is dull.

Oh, and: "Communities, reimagined".

Is that magical enough?

You ought to mention the word microcosm in your strapline

We're now at this:

Microcosm lets people
talk about their interest
on a site dedicated to their interest
and we take care of the tech.

Yes.

Is it bad I don't know what tumblr is...

Cocks, but with puke.

Need promo videos like this one..
http://www.bebo.com/#

Yes.
Is it bad I don't know what tumblr is...

I don't really know what it is and I work on websites that 'do' social meedja (pukes on cock).

Well... this is the graphic going at the top of the listing.

I really don't want to over-simplify the explanation of what it is to the point that it misleads or is in any way false about it is.

This graphic and the text work well together at getting the core across.

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