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• #13651
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• #13653
Lost my job in (online) retail recently and finally sorted out a fair bit of the work I made over the past few years, so that I can send it along when applying for jobs.
Would love to get some critique about selections / amount etc.
Still need to sort out some personal work, but there's no real series I can show, just 'snaps'. Should I add these?
I know the snowboarding category is a bit odd, but I want to keep it in for now.
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• #13654
Needs more girls
: ]It's very well done, bravo.
Can't say if you should add the 'snaps' without seeing them.
All in all the pictures look a bit sterile to me, to be honest.
All the guys look like they're in a shitty mood, on drugs, or both.
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Yeah, I know about the facial expressions. Esp now that they're all put in a series, it's quite bad. But in my defense, none of them are prof models, just some mates with time off (from shooting up ;))
And I can actually add some girls. Thanks for the reminder.
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• #13656
Ace, it's ridiculously beautiful out there.
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• #13657
Sick
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• #13658
I can make noise.
mp3 or it didn't happen.
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• #13659
the first and 4th to last shots are beautiful! really wanna get out in the countryside now!
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• #13660
I don't think the category is odd, but I would maybe change the name as there is some skiing in there too ;)
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• #13661
Leaving the pictures aside, you need someone to proofread your bio as it doesn't read all that well at the moment.
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• #13662
Thanks, it's mostly round Essex and Suffolk.
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• #13663
Great photographs of your foxes Will.
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• #13664
fwiw I think the outfits page could benefit by carefully dropping in some detail or context shots. I bet you can use your snapshots and alter the overall mood - it's all in the editorial choices. All the shots are good.
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• #13665
Thanks, dubbing it 'snowboarding' is quite a stupid mistake indeed. :)
Bio has been send over for proofreading.
Unfortunately I barely have any context/detail shots, but I'll def see what I can find.
Appreciate the feedback!
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• #13666
Thanks Neil.
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• #13667
Another note that the fox pictures are lovely.
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• #13668
Rough night?
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• #13669
Loving this bike for finding photo locations. Much faster than walking but a good speed for having a proper look at things.
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• #13670
Scooter.
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• #13672
Apocalypse Now
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• #13674
nice one..
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