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Nice.
Straighten it, and maybe take the line right to the bottom left corner? You can always move the moon to the right a little.
Practice your panning. The jiggly text on the front of the bus is distracting. I'd crop the top a little to get rid of that small band of white. I like how the bus looks like it's taking off!
Great. Good juxtaposition of textures between the shadows and the sand.
Crop this to more of a 16:9 shape, i.e. panorama. It's good, but that sky is just dead space. I'd clone out the aircraft (?) lights too.
Hope that helps. You in Edinburgh?