Looks OK, the spokes will straighten out once they are tight. I'm not sure that I would have interlaced a 28h 3x because the final crossing is still quite near the hub. Then again, I probably wouldn't even do 28h 3x at all because as you can see it verges on going past tangential - a slightly larger flange or a slightly deeper rim and they would be.
Having said all that, I expect they will be fine when finished
Looks OK, the spokes will straighten out once they are tight. I'm not sure that I would have interlaced a 28h 3x because the final crossing is still quite near the hub. Then again, I probably wouldn't even do 28h 3x at all because as you can see it verges on going past tangential - a slightly larger flange or a slightly deeper rim and they would be.
Having said all that, I expect they will be fine when finished