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Nef-
It was funny in principle
Appreciated the attempt, though the joke needed more recognition of the 2/3 act framework described in chekov's og quoteIf you say in the first chapter that there is a rifle hanging on the wall, in the second or third chapter it absolutely must go off. If it's not going to be fired, it shouldn't be hanging there."
skydancer
You mean someone's getting drunk in 3 days