It's a good idea and is both bleak but with humour.
If I had to nit-pick, I'd say the framing doesn't make the most of the subject and makes it less effective. Also, there seems to be motion blur as if it was taken mid-stride.
I think it would benefit from either being shot straight on or just higher, from an angle, like you've done but centred vertically.
This is purely meant as constructive criticism so please don't feel as if we're flaming you!
Yeah all of this.
What are you trying to show? get to the heart of it!
This is what I would have done.
Then opened in PS and worked the fuck out of it (but not as much HDR as other posts)
Sharpen in LAB.
Lil bit of grain.
Bobs ya uncle.
It's a good idea and is both bleak but with humour.
If I had to nit-pick, I'd say the framing doesn't make the most of the subject and makes it less effective. Also, there seems to be motion blur as if it was taken mid-stride.
I think it would benefit from either being shot straight on or just higher, from an angle, like you've done but centred vertically.
This is purely meant as constructive criticism so please don't feel as if we're flaming you!