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It's a good idea and is both bleak but with humour.
If I had to nit-pick, I'd say the framing doesn't make the most of the subject and makes it less effective. Also, there seems to be motion blur as if it was taken mid-stride.
I think it would benefit from either being shot straight on or just higher, from an angle, like you've done but centred vertically.This is purely meant as constructive criticism so please don't feel as if we're flaming you!
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