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  • Nice.


    Straighten it, and maybe take the line right to the bottom left corner? You can always move the moon to the right a little.


    Practice your panning. The jiggly text on the front of the bus is distracting. I'd crop the top a little to get rid of that small band of white. I like how the bus looks like it's taking off!


    Great. Good juxtaposition of textures between the shadows and the sand.


    Crop this to more of a 16:9 shape, i.e. panorama. It's good, but that sky is just dead space. I'd clone out the aircraft (?) lights too.

    Hope that helps. You in Edinburgh?

    Cheers Photoben, I'm actually in Newport, south of Dundee. I couldn't work out what the lights in the last shot were but I think you're right they're a plane. I don't feel bad about cropping them out now.

    Still getting to grips with shooting RAW and developing in Lightroom, really enjoying the control the GX1 gives over the old compact camera.

    I appreciate the feedback :)

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