Straighten it, and maybe take the line right to the bottom left corner? You can always move the moon to the right a little.
Practice your panning. The jiggly text on the front of the bus is distracting. I'd crop the top a little to get rid of that small band of white. I like how the bus looks like it's taking off!
Great. Good juxtaposition of textures between the shadows and the sand.
Crop this to more of a 16:9 shape, i.e. panorama. It's good, but that sky is just dead space. I'd clone out the aircraft (?) lights too.
Hope that helps. You in Edinburgh?
Cheers Photoben, I'm actually in Newport, south of Dundee. I couldn't work out what the lights in the last shot were but I think you're right they're a plane. I don't feel bad about cropping them out now.
Still getting to grips with shooting RAW and developing in Lightroom, really enjoying the control the GX1 gives over the old compact camera.
Cheers Photoben, I'm actually in Newport, south of Dundee. I couldn't work out what the lights in the last shot were but I think you're right they're a plane. I don't feel bad about cropping them out now.
Still getting to grips with shooting RAW and developing in Lightroom, really enjoying the control the GX1 gives over the old compact camera.
I appreciate the feedback :)