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For me, the first sentence only works on the 2nd reading. On the first reading I go a little lost without the commas.
I prefer this...dramatic voice
'...an elderly lady, well wrapped up against London’s chill while inching, her mobility-scooter, Home asked whether I could spare one of my precious, roll-ups'.