I think they're not bad, but if you want me to be honest they don't do anything for me.
It would help if they would 'pop' more, be sharper, be better "developed", contrast-wise.
In the BMX shot there's just an awful lot of (boring) very dark 'background" that does not help at all.
The light is not too bad.
Maybe just the (left) half of it would have impact as an upright format.
I'd also straighten it a bit, and flip it horizontally. I know the graffiti would give it away but if it was for Nike SB I'd say fuck it.
Also who the hell rides BMX in a jacket like that?
I think they're not bad, but if you want me to be honest they don't do anything for me.
It would help if they would 'pop' more, be sharper, be better "developed", contrast-wise.
In the BMX shot there's just an awful lot of (boring) very dark 'background" that does not help at all.
The light is not too bad.
Maybe just the (left) half of it would have impact as an upright format.
I'd also straighten it a bit, and flip it horizontally. I know the graffiti would give it away but if it was for Nike SB I'd say fuck it.
Also who the hell rides BMX in a jacket like that?