It's painfully bad prose. Reads like a fucking GCSE project, for which I'd give a C+ (naturally).
Give him a break--he's a journalist. :) If you try to find good style in every text, it'll only do your head in.
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Give him a break--he's a journalist. :) If you try to find good style in every text, it'll only do your head in.