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Not entirely lacking in dramitic [sic] tension, Dooks; what action there is, although denuded of its full potential for suspenceful impact, nonetheless captures the reader's attention with its vim and elan, while, as a convincing facsimile of contemporary street argot, it impresses, although in the final analysis it is perhaps most persuasive as an exposition of the life-affirming bonhomie sadly lacking in much of our social interaction today. All in all, an engaging, if not fully realised, vignette. A story fit for King's.

A load of bullshit fit for King's[sic].

*winky face.