Loose the ugly type on opener,
loose the waving guy,
loose the About:, its not needed,
don't put copy above and below the vimeo video, keep the copy together,
loose the N.B. copy no need for it,
get someone else to help you with the words in general.
Loose the ugly type on opener,
loose the waving guy,
loose the About:, its not needed,
don't put copy above and below the vimeo video, keep the copy together,
loose the N.B. copy no need for it,
get someone else to help you with the words in general.
Hope this is helpful to you!