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  • Not shocking enough, when I woke up semi-conscious after having come within inches of being killed I was covered in bits of broken glass and blood, they should have made it far more shocking, really real, maybe drive home the reality of how bad it really can be.

    So how do you think they can make it more shocking? What do you think that will really drive it home?

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