Thats cool, studio work is good fun, not a bad shot you got there, I think the shadows on her right arm are a bit harsh though personally and would have either moved the right hand softbox further away or used a ring flash for on axis fill to help eliminate the harsh shadows or at least soften them to a degree. Also little bits of retouching such as removing the dust spot in the background, and I would have removed the mole on her body, but that is subjective of course, stray hairs can often do with cloning out as well whilst still maintaining the natural look, as I personally think too much stray hair gives a messy look to the image, but it is of course important to leave some in the shot to maintain some semblance of a natural look.
Thats cool, studio work is good fun, not a bad shot you got there, I think the shadows on her right arm are a bit harsh though personally and would have either moved the right hand softbox further away or used a ring flash for on axis fill to help eliminate the harsh shadows or at least soften them to a degree. Also little bits of retouching such as removing the dust spot in the background, and I would have removed the mole on her body, but that is subjective of course, stray hairs can often do with cloning out as well whilst still maintaining the natural look, as I personally think too much stray hair gives a messy look to the image, but it is of course important to leave some in the shot to maintain some semblance of a natural look.