I need your opinions ...

Title page
-I would make the 'F' on the title a normal F rather than stretching it out. It makes the kerning awful and the actual title not immediately clear.

• "Issue 1" should be made smaller and moved somewhere more conspicuous.
  
• In my opinion type should not be altered (i.e stretched, tilted) in anyway so the bottom wording should be altered.
  
• The picture is too dark, though it is interesting.
  
  

Contents page

• I like the large picture but the type seems slightly clunky, perhaps placing the type over the picture?
  
• The grey bar at the bottom is not needed, it takes up too much space and would detract from any pictures you have in the future.
  
• You don't need the issue number at the bottom of the page.
  
  

Sorry I hope I have not been too harsh. I like the concept it just needs refining. Good luck