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  • Design critique: The whole thing feels kinda big. If you're set on one column that's cool, but it gives some very long line lengths (~25 or more). You have large spacing between paragraphs, but too little leading, so the paragraphs end up very wide, short and bunched up. The justified text worsens things because it messes up the tracking. I do like the colours though and the graphic treatment is nice. The front page is pointless, consider leaving "Click to enter" in the 90s.

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