I think there are a number of things wrong with it, the biggest being the use of "works".
This. Even at the best interpretation of his words, he's been very careless with them. And loftily scornful of anybody who doesn't get precisely what he so sloppily said.
This. Even at the best interpretation of his words, he's been very careless with them. And loftily scornful of anybody who doesn't get precisely what he so sloppily said.