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Nice work. Not totally my genre but happy to give some feedback.
The kick feels like it wouldn't hurt to have a slightly longer body/tail to it. The high percussion, the hats/shaker stuff, for me could have a bit more bite - maybe a little bit of saturation/distortion on it?
Only other thing is that I felt the little synth part that comes in around 2:35 sounded slightly out of key - I know it's not, but it maybe didn't sit as well as the other melodic parts.
HTH!
thank you that's great very much appreciated, getting feedback from a few different quarters is really useful! cheers
Nice work. Not totally my genre but happy to give some feedback.
The kick feels like it wouldn't hurt to have a slightly longer body/tail to it. The high percussion, the hats/shaker stuff, for me could have a bit more bite - maybe a little bit of saturation/distortion on it?
Only other thing is that I felt the little synth part that comes in around 2:35 sounded slightly out of key - I know it's not, but it maybe didn't sit as well as the other melodic parts.
HTH!