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Nice work. Not totally my genre but happy to give some feedback.
The kick feels like it wouldn't hurt to have a slightly longer body/tail to it. The high percussion, the hats/shaker stuff, for me could have a bit more bite - maybe a little bit of saturation/distortion on it?
Only other thing is that I felt the little synth part that comes in around 2:35 sounded slightly out of key - I know it's not, but it maybe didn't sit as well as the other melodic parts.
HTH!
Regal-
Nice work. Not totally my genre but happy to give some feedback.
The kick feels like it wouldn't hurt to have a slightly longer body/tail to it. The high percussion, the hats/shaker stuff, for me could have a bit more bite - maybe a little bit of saturation/distortion on it?
Only other thing is that I felt the little synth part that comes in around 2:35 sounded slightly out of key - I know it's not, but it maybe didn't sit as well as the other melodic parts.
HTH!
thank you that's great very much appreciated, getting feedback from a few different quarters is really useful! cheers
EB
got this Joris Voorn esque Proggish piece underway - needs some work still, this is just a test export a quick master chain bunged on to bring the levels up - snare roll is crap/needs work/needs scrapping altogether - kick/bass maybe need work, some weight taken out of one or both - the second kind of breakdown with the pad riff going to a lower octave....maybe something else needs to come in - a melodic line?
see what you think would love any feedback - it's for a label 10th release compilation so needs finished in next week or so - cheers
https://soundcloud.com/rollright-knights/prog-124-bpm-test/s-Hkc98