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Probably not the wisest thing to do putting your address and phone number on essentially a public forum.
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• #3
Also, PDF is your friend.
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• #4
Fixed, cheers! Not sure where you are seeing the 'response', unless it's a grammar issue?
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• #5
PDF-ied now*
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• #6
Here
‘Gorillapod’
PR Event, which generated circa a million clicks and huge responce via social media. -
• #7
'Smooth' needn't be in italics I don't think
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• #9
So given the double negative, it ought to be in italics?
Or just you haven’t applied thought to this?
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• #10
Hi. These spelling, grammar and formatting issues caught my eye:
'What is Quantum Mechanics and the 20th century' - doesn't seem right. Is this supposed to be a question? Put the title in italics to match the other dissertation.
'organized', 'organization' and 'analyzed' are US spelling, sometimes used in the UK, but you have also used 'co-organised'.
'liasing' is not really a word, people use it but better to avoid.
'Work Experience gained during the high school and university eductaion' is overcomplicated and the last word has a spelling mistake. 'Work experience during high school and university' seems to cover it.
‘Sales Man’ - 'Salesman', but would expect this to be 'Salesperson'.
Avoid unnecessary word capitalisation - leads to problems such as both 'graduate' and 'Graduate' in the first line. 'Club' and 'Project' are other examples.
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• #11
'liasing' is not really a word, people use it but better to avoid.
It's also 'liaising'.
I haven't read the original document, but yes, avoid capitalising terms unless they're proper names or recognised technical terms that are usually capitalised.
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• #12
Or German.
Er... well... can one really misspell a word that doesn't exist? ;-)
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• #13
Well, you've got me there. :)
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Please get in touch if you like my CV!
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