Car appreciation... the aesthetics, the engineering, etc

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Dammit

I've removed that photo, removed a little of the Swiss Toni, moved the text around a little.

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Olly398 in reply to @Dammit
As others have said:
1. Engine power and torque up front or in title
2. Make more of fact it has basically been restored
3. Less words
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bq in reply to @Dammit

Much better.
I like the idea of putting "fully restored" and "full engine rebuild 30k miles ago" right up there with the mileage.

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