Your position might not be that bad, some people have that hunched quality even when they're in an optimised position. Just look at Armstrong
It's much easier to get that flat back/relaxed shoulders look like the woman above when you have minimal saddle to bar drop and locked out elbows like she does.
You could try a concave saddle like an SMP or similar to help with pelvic rotation. Also it looks like getting into the drops wouldn't be all that comfy with that much drop.
Your position might not be that bad, some people have that hunched quality even when they're in an optimised position. Just look at Armstrong
It's much easier to get that flat back/relaxed shoulders look like the woman above when you have minimal saddle to bar drop and locked out elbows like she does.
You could try a concave saddle like an SMP or similar to help with pelvic rotation. Also it looks like getting into the drops wouldn't be all that comfy with that much drop.