• He wears a tatty grey t-shirt and tatty grey shorts, tatty grey socks and brown sandals. He has a great sheaf of bin bags tucked into the waste band of his shorts, cheap bin bags,

    It should be "waistband" shirley?

    Edit:

    He says, You go home. It ok. I say so.”

    You missed a " there I think.

    EditEdit:
    hugely enjoyed reading that, though.

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