I think possibly there are a few things then; if she was stood a little straighter/higher (camera also accordingly), closed mouth, and some subtle fill-in light from low-left (a reflector) for the eyes.
Obviously an assitant with a reflector would pretty much always be nice to have hey!
It'd be interesting to see it with slow flash too i guess... so the background drops off more.
Ok, i see.
I think possibly there are a few things then; if she was stood a little straighter/higher (camera also accordingly), closed mouth, and some subtle fill-in light from low-left (a reflector) for the eyes.
Obviously an assitant with a reflector would pretty much always be nice to have hey!
It'd be interesting to see it with slow flash too i guess... so the background drops off more.
And half a step closer.