I'd let the container breathe a bit more to help the legibility of the "S".
When you add rounds to strokes in illustrator, it adds a bit on, so you might want to move the base of the "A" up a bit more to keep the consistent lineweight/negative space.
I'd let the container breathe a bit more to help the legibility of the "S".
When you add rounds to strokes in illustrator, it adds a bit on, so you might want to move the base of the "A" up a bit more to keep the consistent lineweight/negative space.