Guess if you were aiming for clarity it would have helped to just tilt the camera down (and maybe left) a bit more (I find the background a bit distracting / not adding to the image).
Thanks for the tip - I think consistent good framing is the next thing I want to try and learn, I guess just taking those extra few seconds over each shot is a good place to start?
One for Tina, but without the compositional clarity...