• Loved the story, as always.

    Got some sub editing for you:

    Baited, not bated.

    By, not buy.

    And your apostrophe use in "it's" for possession is consistently wrong.

    Gun cunt < grammar cunt?

  • Cheers mate - I think I've found all my rogue 'it's' now. They are a proper blind spot in my writing, I must brush up on stuff like that.

    I rely on grammar cunts because I'm so bad at it!! Keep it up!

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