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  • It's really good having LFGSS as my editors.
    You lot say it how it is, pull my punctuation and spellings, let me know when my words are weak. I love it. I don't reckon I'd still be tapping it out if it wasn't for you lot.
    I also love it when my stuff reminds people of their own experiences - killing hens with an air rifle?? Head shot? Intriguing...
    Cheers for reading, lads and lasses.

  • Loved the story, as always.

    Got some sub editing for you:

    Baited, not bated.

    By, not buy.

    And your apostrophe use in "it's" for possession is consistently wrong.

    Gun cunt < grammar cunt?

  • Cheers mate - I think I've found all my rogue 'it's' now. They are a proper blind spot in my writing, I must brush up on stuff like that.

    I rely on grammar cunts because I'm so bad at it!! Keep it up!

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