There were a few passages - whether it was they style, rhythm or content, I'm not sure - that really reminded me of something, but I can't for the life of me remember what.
Cheers buddy - I've written a few things in that rhythm now and I enjoy writing like that, for a change. As you say, it may be that rhythm that's familiar, or another writer that's written in a similar style.
I hope it's not the Da Vinci Code or anything like that!!
First post of the year. A bit longer, a bit different.
https://generallucifer.wordpress.com/2015/01/16/140-the-bay/
Hope you like.