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  • I like this one the best out of all of them.

    Needs a little editing down a bit, to concentrate some of the imagery imho.

    Overall, excellent though!

  • Yeah, editing is my weak point! I reckon everything I write could be greatly improved by the shrewd eye of an editor and I lack the ability to kill my own darlings a lot of the time.
    Cheers though!

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